In response to Arizona...really

     When I was, browsing my colleague's blog, I found Arizona… really. This is a blog about the Arizona’s Immigration Law. The author says that Arizona has passed this bill, which is failing in few years. Author says that Arizona’s law will promote racial profiling. He argues Arizona's law has granted rights to police to investigate the id and their position if they suspect anyone to be illegal. The author said that he is not satisfied with the law and does not require such law in Texas. In addition, he guesses that the economy of Arizona will fail because the immigrants will not be there to do all the labor work. Author adds that legal Citizens are not willing to do all of labor works. He also blames Arizona for making racial profiling licensed in Arizona through the Immigraton law.


     I do think that Arizona’s Immigration law was not a smart idea. We have the right to express our dissatisfaction on the jobs done by our Government. However, I think the author needs more ideas and information to give more power and truthful facts. Author should provide complete and logical ideas why he is arguing against Arizona’s Law. I did not find any material facts and idea that strongly supports his argument. Therefore, the author’s arguments were weak and just based on his reaction rather than facts and logics. He has a solid beginning but, his thesis and resolution were not enough and strong. It is true that he has asked questions at the beginning and in the middle of the content. I think it would have been better if he would research more ideas rather than limited blog with extremely little information. Arizona’s Immigration law is one of the hot topics at present, so the author could have added a bit more and new ideas regarding it. Therefore, author has weak argument without explicit facts, evidences, and information. The author is unsuccessful to provide clear vision about his argument.